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Twenty rules for writing a detective novel
A
modern re-write (ex novo, in reality!)
by
Rina Brundu Eustace
They’re eighty years old but
don’t look it! I’m talking about the Twenty rules for writing
detective stories by S. S. Van Dine (pseudonym of Willard
Huntington Wright, 1888- 1939), the celebrated American crime writer
of the golden age.
Just like that! In reading and re-reading them a question
spontaneously comes to mind: what modern author wouldn’t endorse
almost all of them? I say almost because, in reality,
something has changed, not so much within the text, as in the
production context. It goes without saying: times have changed
(that’s not a contradiction)!
The
competition is ruthless, particularly in the form of avant-garde
television serials dealing with correlated themes (citing for all,
the mythical CSI series, the original with William Petersen in the
role of Gil Grissom to clarify matters!), while the overcrowded
internet doesn’t skimp on criminal emotion at every click.
However, one can’t deny that this literary genre (we’ll dare
to call it that, what harm will it do?) has demonstrated an
unsuspected resistance to repeated attacks. Its strength originates
from its being closed tight like a clam, conserving its
peculiarities intact (perhaps thanks also to the supporting work by
Van Dine!). Its firm structuring and style will, as far as I’m
concerned, be the winning weapon that guarantees its survival and
public success for many years to come.
That doesn’t mean that some of the rules, set out eighty years ago
by the American writer, don’t have a somewhat obsolete quality, it’s
also pointless denying that others have been completely out-dated by
the natural evolution of human feelings (and hence by the criminal
practices engaged in, and hence by the investigation methods used!).
We have to admit it! There’s nothing bad or presumptuous about
maintaining such a position; above all, nothing detracts from the
author’s greatness. In the same way, nothing stops the old teachings
from existing alongside the new rules, which are intended to plug
the leaks in that slice of time since they were formulated.
What follows is a liberal re-write, (ex novo, in reality!) of 20
rules for writing detective stories, according to my extremely
modest understanding. What is put forward is a personal view of
elements of detective fiction and doesn’t have any universal
ambition (neither is this a contradiction in terms, in case anyone
thinks so!). For these very reasons and for the respect that is
always owed to those far worthier than ourselves, I will indicate,
where necessary, any strong stance taken with regard to the Van Dine
original.
A
detective novel will therefore be much more valid when the author
remembers:
1.
A detective novel
is a detective novel; it’s not an adventure, spy, or romantic novel,
neither is it a philosophical treatise or a literary work that will
change the world. Furthermore, a detective novel, by its very
nature, is always written from a starting point and NEVER from a
finishing point (another aspect is the valid plots inserted in
different literary situations, for example, the wonderful criminal
plot in The Name of the Rose by Umberto Eco). This means that
if a crime novelist considers him or herself a well rounded writer,
they will have to prove themselves through other works. In the same
way, enlightened literary critics, in possession of the truth of
things, should avoid feeling insulted and urging the expert
populace not to take crime writers seriously; this promptly occurs
every time there is renewed interest in their works! God forbid!!
2.
A good detective
novel doesn’t have any other meaning; so it’s pointless
singing the author’s praises for highlighting significant social
problems of today or for its subtle semantic qualities. A good
detective novel must be judged, solely and exclusively, on the
quality of its criminal plot and on the fluidity with which it is
built into the story.
3.
If it is true that detective novels can be written by anyone, it is
also true that not everyone can write a detective novel. To opt for
a similar style signifies confessing to be a symptom-free carrier of
a mental perversion (viewed positively, we must say that such a
perversion is always accompanied by an indispensable genial streak)
that is expressed by this (by the style, to make things clear, not
by becoming a serial killer hunted by Interpol!). This is a
conditio sine qua non; refrain therefore, ye literati
desirous of dignifying the genre (driven mainly by financial
need!), talented authors ready to prove yourselves, crime
journalists justifying your deeds by relating first hand
experience, and the like!
4.
Atmosphere is an
irreplaceable element of this type of fiction. This mainly means
that a detective novel, in order to be one, must take hold of the
reader from the first page, seducing and reassuring him so he
feels at home. On this point, I don’t agree with the
instructions provided by Van Dine in rule 16. To justify my
thoughts, I cite some of the genre’s greatest works of all time:
And then there were none, Mousetrap, The Murder of Roger Ackroyd,
Murder on the Orient Express, etc. In these novels, the
atmosphere becomes an active element of the plot; it's not by chance
either that these were written by Agatha Christie, a
masterful exponent of similar techniques (that are developed in
experienced writers). Not to put too fine a point on it, throughout
the works of this great English author, the capacity to create an
atmosphere achieves at times a sublimity beyond the written style:
for a detective novel lover, you only have to hold one of her books
in your hand to feel at home!
5.
A detective novel
cannot exist without a good criminal plot! Call it what you wish, a
crime novelist (it doesn’t matter how famous, it doesn’t matter how
venerated he/she is!) who demonstrates a chronic incapacity to plot
a perfect and ad hoc criminal mechanism, isn’t worthy of the
title.
6.
Readers and investigators must enjoy the same opportunity of solving
the mystery. All clues must be (plainly) presented and described.
This rule is very similar to Van Dine’s first rule. The difference
is the adverb plainly that I’ve put in brackets. In fact, I
consider that to protect itself from the previously mentioned
invasion (television, cinema, internet), the detective novel must be
able to defend itself with its own weapons, its specific
characteristics, its writing style. The structural quality of a
detective novel therefore rests on its capacity to provide clues
(without transforming it into a misleading weapon!), thus giving
attentive readers, and only them, the possibility of discovering the
culprit with relative ease.
7.
The solution to a
detective novel must be unequivocal; there MUST only be one truth
upon which the facts are based. This is also a key condition when
judging the quality of the plot.
8.
The solution to a detective novel must always be within the grasp of
a capable reader.
9.
The culprit can be any one of the characters, regardless of their
role. Furthermore, there can be more than one culprit in the same
novel. Here I find myself at odds with Van Dine’s rules 10, 11, 12
and 17. In my opinion, the requirements of the story and the
criminal plot justify these indications; one could give many
examples of masterpieces in this genre that rely on the use of
similar strategies (Murder on the Orient-Express to name only
one).
10.
A detective novel can have several investigators. For instance, this
happens when the police investigation runs parallel to that of the
amateur detective. However, it is advisable that there should be
only one hero-character in whose capacity for reasoning readers can
place their trust.
11.
There has to be a dead body! Indeed, on most occasions a single
corpse is not sufficient!
12.
There is no corpse without a crime! In other words, the story told
MUST have at least one dead person who is the victim of the
anti-hero’s manoeuvrings.
13.
Murders committed
by criminal organisations have no place in the pages of a detective
novel. Peculiar to this genre, and also the main element that
gives it its fascinating quality, is the focus on the instinctive
motivation for the crime. A detective novel reminds us that we are
all potential assassins! Not only this: the more the character in
question is beyond suspicion, the greater the possibility he (or
she) is the culprit!
14.
On the understanding that the culprit could be a minor character
(see rule 9), the principle characters should be presented straight
away, better still, they should be listed on a special page prior to
the start of the story. The attentive reader, preparing to read a
detective novel, should be regarded as a chess player about to start
a game: naturally he needs to have all the pieces, but then it will
be up to him alone to checkmate the killer!
15.
Originality is also an essential element in a criminal plot. A
writer can use strategies that are already familiar, whatever they
may be, but a plot is not valid if it doesn’t contain a particular
feature of its own that distinguishes it from all preceding works.
16.
The hero-character’s investigative methods must always be supported
by a broad capacity for logical reasoning and for an approach to the
empirical fundamentals of the case, that is based on his experience
(not only of criminal but also, and above all, of everyday things!).
17.
The sporting anti-hero is another peculiarity of detective novels.
By this I mean that a hero that makes measurable investigative
methodology his first line of attack will be countered by an
anti-hero capable of plotting a criminal plan with a scientific
slant. The scientific base is provided by the experiment’s
reproducibility (no transcendental tricks here!).
18.
The denouement
of the story must always be the privilege of the
hero-investigator.
19.
The denouement can NEVER be partial. An attentive reader must
ALWAYS be able to finish the book, with the minimum satisfaction of
having had explained, not only the rationale behind every clue and
its real valid status, but also that behind every misleading change
(there has to be one! Otherwise it would be too easy!). In short,
all the cards have to be laid on the table (there’s never been a
more appropriate place than this!).
20.
A detective novel is above all a challenge from the author to the
reader! It follows that attentive readers cannot limit themselves to
pointing to one or other character as the certain killer. The
chances of being correct are naturally very high, given the limited
number of characters! There is no doubt, however, that a respected
sleuth is distinguished from an amateur detective, not so much
because they are invariably capable of finding the culprit, but
because they are always able to explain, in detail, how the events
took place. When we consider that matters can be brought to
completion in one and only one way (see rule 7), that says it
all!
Rina Brundu Eustace
January 2006, Dublin
Coppyright MMVI
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Brief
Bio.

Rina Brundu (born 1968) is the author
of the novel Tana di Volpe featuring the Sardinian detective
Don Osvaldo Da Silva Ochoa. She was born in Villanova Strisaili, a
small town in the Sardinian province of Ogliastra. After graduating
in Modern Languages and Literature, she moved to Ireland where she
still lives and works.
Creator of the Sardinian detective Don Osvaldo Da Silva Ochoa,
she published her first short-story The wake in a Sardinian
magazine while still at University, while Tana di Volpe (Fox
Den, 2003) is her first novel. In May 2006, she edited Isole,
Scritture Letterarie, Momenti d'Ogliastra, the first antology of
the new Ogliastra Province which contains the works of several
well-known linguists, journalists and writers as well as many of her
own articles. In July 2006, she won the AVANT GARDEN LITERARY PRIZE
with her short-story Sirbone. A writer with a strong interest in
journalism, her works have been published in the national weekly
magazine Diario, in the literary reviews Pentelite and
I Siracusani, and in many websites.
Again, in May 2006, Tana di Volpe and her author have been
included in the prestigiuos Sardinian literature "In presenza di
tutte le lingue del mondo" by university professor Giuseppe
Marci. This textbook is published by the university publisher CUEC.
Terza Pagina World
is Rina Brundu's first online literary product. See also Premio
Letterario L'indizio Nascosto - The Hidden Clue Award, Italian Crime
Writer of the Year, Manifesto Net - Navigo, Ergo Sum, Giallografia
and Twenty Rules for Writing a Detective Novel (in English).
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